Feedback session with Janet was tricky as I had just left the doctors having had an ultrasound and it was cold and windy so the zoom call was not too clear on the AV side of things, but nevertheless I made notes:
Find the Five key words
Bib
Abstract not present
Say research paper
Grammarly and italic make it look better. Harvard convention.
Research paper brief from Jonathan. Indented quotes etc. the visuals are important.
Incidentally( -the moment whats happening how had it been woven into end result) feminist rather than accidentally
Less about magritte and degas and more about
Better source clarity on underrepresentation of women.
I found these brief notes very helpful in the end but wished we had talked more about content and less about structure. Now i understand that structure helps form content.
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